Really well done
I remember you submitting the first one a while back and I think that they are both really well done. The animation wasn't the best, but the story that is told is solid and everything is executed really well. I really like your style and I think that you should continue to make these and continue to better your animation/drawing abilities; once you get those down a bit better you will be making front-page worthy flash. This is really a nice shimmer of light in the otherwise blackhole known as 'The Portal." Keep up the good work! ;)