Needs improvement
Keep working on it.
Try adding some animation to it as well - it seemed more or less a slide show.
Also, the vocals were very unclear - I really couldn't understand half of what you said.
Keep trying
Needs improvement
Keep working on it.
Try adding some animation to it as well - it seemed more or less a slide show.
Also, the vocals were very unclear - I really couldn't understand half of what you said.
Keep trying
okay, will do, and the sound sounds bad becouse i tried to save space...perhaps too much.
Not bad
Was really just too short
It was really nice looking though
The file size was way to big - you need to work on that - such a small clip shouldn't have a file size of nearly 4k
Not bad
The animation was above average and some parts where just really well done.
The only real problem that is worth noting is that the music choice made absolutely no sense.
Keep up the good work ;-)
Not bad
Can't wait to see the actual animation ^_^
i forgot to mention, the first epsiode is already out. i only put this intro on becoz i thought it would complement it. here's the link:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/301946
Keep improving
You are above doing stick figure animations (not that all stick animations are bad) and that is a plus.
The wave effect was pretty spiff.
The one thing you need to work on is substance - there should be some sort of story line, character development, etc. Also, keep in mind that a ~30 seccond flash probrably won't be enough...
Keep working!
Not bad
I usually don't like clocks, glocks, and lock; however, animations like this (with substance behind them) are begining to win me over...
Haha, it happens sometimes.
It's how I work at least, there's a huge variaty of clocks, glocks, locks, etc.
Funny
I usually hate clock/glock stuff, but this one was an exception.
If more were like this, I might start to like them.
Should be longer
It looked really nice, it was just lacking in substance.
Kepp working with it.
Needs improvement
Raise the frame rate please - everything felt like it was in slow motion.
Also, it was just very boring in general.
Age 35, Male
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Joined on 3/3/06